本文的评价与提高建议： 上面这篇演讲稿，层次清晰，语言流畅，句式变化多样，所写内容围绕志愿者的相关内容而展开，文稿内容符合习作要求和演讲的特点。尤其是开头两句，表达了作者的心情并介绍了题目，符合演讲的特点。对于volunteer一词含义的介绍，也让人感到很有趣，但略显繁琐，如能缩写一下会更好。另外，在文稿中和听众有所交流，这样的互动环节让演讲生动起来。文稿中虽也有几处错误，但是我们认为瑕不掩玉。总体说来文章写得很成功。让我们来思考一下下面的问题，让文章变得完美吧！
不错哦 商榷之处： ① 文稿的标题似乎不太扣题，应斟酌一下为好。 ② 本句中的without是介词，后面应接be的-ing形式。 ③ think over是动词和副词组成的词组，接代词时代词应放在两者中间。 ④ though都有转折的作用，在一个具体的句子中，两个连词只能保留其中的一个。 and but ⑤ 当million前面没有具体数字修饰，而表达“数以百万计的”意思时，要在后面加上-s, 再加上of。 4. 对比写作 Being Volunteers is Great Hello, everyone! It's my great honor to give a speech before class. My topic is Being Volunteers is Great. What is the meaning of the word "volunteer"? It is not only a noun, but also a verb. It means a person who offers to do something without being paid. And it also means to give or offer one's help without being paid. After you know the meanings of the word, I have a question to ask you. Who is the greatest Chinese volunteer in your mind? Please think it over. We may have the same answer. Most of us can agree that Lei Feng is the greatest Chinese volunteer. Volunteer is today Lei Feng. Though we students are young and don't have much money, we can still learn much from Lei Feng and do many things for others. We can do many things just like Lei Feng. Now there are million of volunteers in China. Let's join them to do something together at once. Don't put it off. Become a volunteer today! I believe the more volunteers we have, the better our life will be. Do you agree with me? That's all. Thank you for listening.
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