不错哦 首先，要认真审题，更重要的是审图，明确题目的要求，也要明白图片中的细节，同时我们也要发挥想象力，积极展开联想，把握图片中的关键情节以及相互之间的关系，让每一幅图片由静止的瞬间变成活动的连续的画面，进而为构思语段作准备。 其次，为图片中所表达的动作选取相应的词语，确定主要的时态和叙述的方式。这里要提一下的是看图写话类型的时态可能也有很多种选择，但主要的应该是相应的过去时态，如一般过去时，过去进行时，过去完成时等等。 再次，统一文章的词语和句型的使用，但也要选取自己最熟悉、也最有把握的词语和句型来表达，以避免不必要的错误。运用恰当的过渡词语与句子将图片的中心句连接起来，让文章成为有机的整体。 最后，结合图片进行检查，核对单词的书写和句型的运用，以及句子间是否连贯通顺，是否有细节被遗漏等等。 c. 本文的评价与提高建议： 从整体来看，这篇文章说得很全面，记录了图片中的主要内容，做到了表达完整，语句连贯，对于时态的运用也基本正确，但美中不足的是文章内容的发挥不够。这样就容易造成字数上不足的结果，给人一种读起来言之无物的感觉。字数不足也是写作能力需要提高的一个表现，在考试中成绩也就不太理想。因此，我们一定要在符合要求的情况下，尽可能恰当地表达清楚图片的意思，让文章变得丰满起来。还有一条需要引起注意的是，本文写作中要求使用过去完成时，这时我们常常无法避免使用过去分词。因此要在平时加强对于过去式以及过去分词变化中特殊形式的记忆，尽量不要发生因记不清或者误用过去分词而在作文中造成错误的情况。 文章有当中的几处错误，让我们修改一下！ （1）because of应改为because。因为because of表示“因为……”时，后面接名词或代词，而because后面常接句子。 （2）oversleep应改为overslept。根据句意，此处应表示她睡过头了，oversleep应是过去式overslept. （3）already 应放在had left之间。already主要放在助动词had和实义动词之间。 （4）left应改为had left。根据句意，本句前面有一个作对比的时态，即一般过去时，那么在“过去的过去”所发生的动作相应的就应该使用过去完成时态了。 4. 对比写作： A Bad Morning Today everyone was happy except Tina. She said that she was stressed out because she had a bad morning. First of all, the clock didn't go off in the morning. So she overslept. By the time she got up, her brother had already gotten in the shower. After he got out of the shower, she took a quick shower and got dressed. She didn't have time to have breakfast. She must catch the bus. Unfortunately, when she got to the bus stop, the bus had already left. She had to run all the way to school. When she got to school, she realized she had left her backpack at home. She ran home to get her backpack. But when she got home, she realized she had left her keys in the backpack. So she ran back to school without her keys or her backpack. And by the time she got back to school, the teacher had started teaching. She was late for class. The teacher was very angry with her. She was so sad this morning. What a bad morning she had!
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