First, you will spend much money and the students from poor families may be worried about that. Second, it will also waste a lot of time. It is bad for your study, too. Then, some of the students may get in bad habits, such as smoking, drinking wines .
Why not celebrate your birthday with your friends by going hiking or fishing or doing other things? I think it’s a good way for us to celebrate our birthday by giving paper cards as birthday presents. As students, we should spend our money a 《人教版新目标八年级下全册写作指导》出自：www.89xue.com网
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点评：
上面的这篇习作正文的文章格式正确，作者确定了主题思想，正确表达了生日派对的负面影响，用别人能接受的语言委婉的提出了这样做的弊端，并适当给别人提供了一些建议。
从本文的写作中我们应当借鉴到这样的经验，在日常学习中我们要对知识点有更好地掌握，以免在写作中出现不该出现的错误，运用自己所熟悉的短语与句型去组成一篇属于自己的文章是成功的关键。同时文章中的细节写得更为细化，会使文章更有可读性。
佳句欣赏：
I think it is not the best way to celebrate one’s birthday.
我认为那不是庆祝生日的最好方式。
It is bad for your study, too.
那也不易于你的学习
Why not celebrate your birthday with your friends by going hiking or fishing or doing other things?
为什么不和你的朋友去远足或者钓鱼或者去做些其他的事情来庆祝生日呢？
2.请根据以下要点提示，以“The best gift I have ever received”为题写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1）When did you receive the gift?
2） Who gave it to you? Why did he/she buy you the gift?
3） Why do you like it? Introduce the gift.
要求：语句通顺，70词左右。
The best gift I have ever received
The best gift I have ever received is a camera. It is red. It looks nice. I received it from my dad on my 13th birthday. He knew I love taking photos, so he bought the camera for me . When I traveled with my parents or friends, I would bring the camera with me. I took lots of photos during the travels. The pictures would help me remember those interesting things!
四、小试牛刀：
假如你是Tina，是某电视台英语频道“School English”栏目的忠实观众，请根据下列信息给该栏目的主持人Tom写一封英文信，并表达你对该节目的良好祝愿。
优点：1. 内容丰富（有故事，游戏，英文歌曲等）；
2.有利于提高英语水平（词汇量，听说能力）；
3.能了解更多的外国文化。
不足：1. 语速有点快；
2.每周只播出两次。
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